Talk:Bumblebee/@comment-24592612-20140517215632

To the person who made this article, I fixed some spelling errors.

For a critique, replace the super speed, heat vision, survive in space and enhanced sight with ‘PPG Powers’. (Same with Bliss and Blade.) Keep the hair design and color, but change the clothing for her. Unless you want me to do a redesign for you, be more original than to use the ‘PPG design’ scheme like most PPG OCs have. Same with Bliss and Blade. Also, Blade’s hairstyle needs to be changed around a bit, along with the colors. If you want, I’ll do the redesigns. In other words, you are original, but try to look at others and see what they have done! Also, if Professor Utonium is their father, than that needs to be replaced with someone else. Don’t make them related to the PPG canon characters whatsoever. I also edited Bliss's and Blade's articles. I am not trying to be mean, but to help you improve.