Talk:Fireball/@comment-24592612-20140518121636

To the person who made this article, I fixed some spelling errors.

For a critique, don't make the front hair of Fireball look similar to a canon character's hair. Also, the giant pigtails thing has been done too many times before. Unless you want me to redesign her, than try to make her outfit more original that the whole 'Short-sleeved PPG shirt with shorts and RRB shoes' gimick. You should remove the sonic scream, orange powers, eye lasers, and laser vision with PPG Powers. Add more to her personality than just 'hyper, cheerful, and tomboyish' because that's been done before. And don't have her in contact with the canon characters whatsoever. In other words, okay, but you have to be more original, design and personality wise. Note that I'm not trying to be mean but to help you improve when making fan-characters.